Showing posts with label M Raiya. Show all posts
Showing posts with label M Raiya. Show all posts

Saturday, July 7, 2012

A Sky Full of Wings by M. Raiya

Title: A Sky Full of Wings
Author: M. Raiya
Cover Artist: Alessia Brio
Publisher: Torquere
Genre: fantasy
Length: 15k words

You're invited to a dragon's wedding!

That's right! Varian and Josh from the Notice series are getting married! There will be swooning (not by whom you'd expect) and wings (not on whom you'd expect) and champagne, roses and rainbows. Warning: there will also be mysterious prophecies, swords, and uninvited guests from the distant past. And the grooms will get a wedding gift beyond their wildest dreams.

Find Varian and Josh in Notice, and in Nice: The Dragon and the Mistletoe.

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It’s always lovely to see the big pay-off in the true love—here we get to see Josh and Varian celebrating their wedding. If you don’t know the characters ahead of time, there is enough in here to introduce them somewhat, and to let the reader sink into the general “Aw!” feeling any wedding will inspire. There are a few extra possibilities for the little oopsies no wedding is without, because one of the grooms is a shapeshifting dragon.


Of course everyone they care about is there, resulting in a cast of thousands , each with some small part to play, and it is a lot like a live wedding where one only knows a few of the guests—a kaleidoscope of strangers, and the smallest guests uttering the most memorable lines.

Josh and Varian, and those closest to them, are better explained in the preceding novel, Notice, and if you haven’t read that, you really should, otherwise a number of references and character traits are going to be incomprehensible. All the reasons to care about Josh and Varian start there, aside from general good wishes for those about to get hitched and the humor that comes from an eager but nervous groom.

Everything the blurb promises is in there, but in such a way that this story feels like the set up for something larger and more complicated. There isn’t a lot of actual conflict, though many plot possibilities could arise later from what happens. What little there is has a ring of implausibility, like someone’s been  asleep at the switch for a long time.

The writing is smooth and enjoyable, with some really charming turns of phrase, and the relationship between Josh and Varian is deeper and more loving by the end, but we’re really starting in the middle with this story, and we really haven’t seen an end. Start with Notice, and plan to read whatever comes next, and this story will be more stellar, but as a stand-alone, it’s a lot of happy-happy and not much plot. Which might be just what you’re in the mood for. 3.25 marbles

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Sunday, November 20, 2011

Shifting Steam ed Lorna Hinson

Shifting Steam
Editor: Lorna Hinson
Genre: steampunk/paranormal
Length: 209 pages / 57800 words

Steampunk and shifters? Do they even go together? Of course they do. Steampunk is all about the possible, the magical and the otherworldly. Shapeshifters are all about bending the idea of humanity into new shapes. Combine them, and you get Shifting Steam.

The stories in Shifting Steam pave the way for a magical journey through space and time to alternate realities, where anything is possible. From dragons to birds, from Victorian era expositions to secret laboratories, these stories explore what happens when man meets beast in a world of airship captains and fantastic creatures. Whether it’s a Jekyll and Hyde style beast, a wolfman who would rather not be a wolf, or a man who wishes he could fly, every kind of creature gets its day in the steampunk sun. Step into the world of Shifting Steam and let it transport you to a sexy, fantastical new universe.

Shifting Steam features stories from authors Rowan Benjamin, Missouri Dalton, Ekaterina Morris, Lydia Nyx, M Raiya, Lynn Townsend and Emory Vargas.

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This is a varied collection of stories, ranging from clunky to fine.

Review

Shadow of Kenfig by Lynn Townsend

The story leads off in a very unusual social club over a game of cards. There's a substantial cast, most of whom become irrelevant as the story progresses, though they are described in enough detail that I believe this to be one story in a series. The shifters are gwren, or wolves, much feared but not entirely shunned, although the use of real silver at table tends to weed them out as social acquaintances. The story has an authentic feel of social snobbery and notions of honor – a huge debt at the card table can force a man to do what he might not do otherwise. The gwr-infected Seth needs the gwr expert Dr. Poindexter Fitzhugh's help to learn about and possibly reverse his condition, and while he could have just asked, the card game set up was more interesting.

The evolution of the relationship is extremely abrupt: they go from the sparring of antagonists to protestations of eternal protection in the middle of a painful scientific experiment. It really read as if several pages of development had been accidentally left out, but I didn't find the breaks in the text to account for it. It was as if the damage each had taken and the mere knowledge of each other's sexual orientation was adequate to vault to "forever." Unfortunately, this, one of the more interesting plot elements being told to another character rather than dramatized, and wondering what the rest of the cast had to do with anything, interfered with an otherwise entertaining read.

The Cormorant by Emory Vargas

Miles become obsessed with possible supernatural creatures in the sea, a result of a near drowning as a child. His memory of a cormorant saving him from drowning drives his life and career choices. Another brush with death brings the cormorant again to him, for a brief encounter that might have been a dream, if Anahu had not left a sign of his presence. The steampunk elements are secondary to the story, but the shifter and the man's obsession are well drawn. No HEA, but a memory of a magical interlude that Miles could hope to find again.

The Shores of Loch Mor by Missouri Dalton

This story, with its oscillating POVs, was the most problematical for me. Every few hundred words we are propelled into the other character's head. The story unfolds after the insta-love befalls Carwyn, who is a shape-shifting fae, a puca. He follows the object of his desires, Felix, into town, to woo and win him. Felix, with secrets of his own, is an extremely self-centered jerk, which not only explains his secrets perfectly, but should make him grateful that the Mist-folk fall in love very abruptly and with no regard for the worthiness of the love-object.

Time frame and even world are a little misty here; it feels Elizabethan, even mentioning a local playwright as "William." Echoes of "Midsummer's Night Dream" and "Romeo and Juliet" crop up here and there, as does an unfortunate ring of "Othello." Casual interest becomes insta-love becomes a very heart-felt "you disgust me," becomes "oh I adore you after all." Between the ping-pong POVs and the ping-pong attitudes, this story feels very jerky.

Origin by M Raiya

This story has some overlap from the Notice universe – a dragon shifter and his knightly lover take on a strange creature in a Dickensian but steampunked Liverpool. This is an established couple's story, where Wells and Justin have to confront not only the creature but a magic-using engineer who has some really stomach churning notions of expedience, and their own longing for the days when life was simpler.

This story used the then-infant science of paleontology and mentions the novelty and impact of Darwin's Origin of Species, which I thought was a nice touch, since they were actual developments of the time with serious philosophical fall-out.

Nine and Fifty Swans by Rowan Benjamin

This is a lovely melding of the Victorian sensibility, advanced engineering, and shifter nature. Instead of shifters being hidden denizens of the world, they live openly and even have careers based on their shifting. All swans belong to the queen, even swan shifters, who form an elite fighting force with the new airships. Unfortunately, Swans have a few vulnerabilities, such as being very susceptible to cold while in human form, which requires the attention of a tailor/engineer to design their fighting kit. Sartorial Engineer Fanshawe and Wing Commander Cobbe have a rocky but charming courtship, as Fanshawe struggles to meet Cobbe as an equal. The author uses real swan attributes, adds a few details, and makes them well rounded. Each finds beauty in the other's form and self: there's no 'oh poor human' or 'oh poor shifter' here.

Mr. Black and the Expo by Lydia Nyx

A somewhat tongue-in-cheek take on the were-wolf idea, set against the Great Chicago Expo. Jack and Gerard have been travelling the world, each with their own mission, and are on the way home now. Some of the charm comes from the two prodding each other on how to behave in polite society; some of Jack's best moments happen on paws. His wolfiness has a known cause and a suspected cure; Gerard clearly loves him as shifter and fellow explorer. The affection between them is strong, the escapade dashing, and the resemblance to Gerard's beloved penny dreadfuls adds to the rollicking appeal. A nicely worked adventure.

Affliction by Ekaterina Morris

More of a Jekyll and Hyde transformation – the shifting monster is the experimenter himself, who risked all to cure a long-standing illness before he died, and now longs for death as a release from what he's become. With his unstable form and brilliant mind, Gideon Wright forms an unlikely alliance with chemist-fallen-to-opium addict and thief Harry Ashton, sent to steal the formulae by a criminal mastermind. This story has a lovely mix of steampunk engineering that works, Victorian chemistry and biology that works questionably as science and perfectly as plot, and a sweet relationship between the two MCs.

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As with any anthology, there will be stories that work better than others. The difficulty of satisfying the shifter requirement, the steampunk requirement, the romance element, and the word count of this anthology's call may account for the extreme unevenness of the stories; some of the authors seem to be struggling to manage all the elements. Shadow of Kenfig needs triple the word count to do justice to everything currently packed in it; that would be a story I'd like to read. The Cormorant would work as well, maybe better, in a standard-tech universe.

The smoothest reads, Nine and Fifty Swans and Affliction, have no explicit sex, nor should they: the romance is clear as is.

The concept for this anthology is extremely ambitious; I applaud the authors for taking a swing at it. Rather than rate each story, the entire anthology should be awarded 3.5 marbles



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Tuesday, November 9, 2010

Torquere Charity Sip Blitz Set #6


Still working my way through this substantial collection.

Have Hope by Emily Moreton

When what was supposed to be a simple exchange of information goes to hell in the form of armed soldiers and two bullet wounds, double-agent John Grey makes a fairly desperate run for his rendezvous point. And doesn't make it.

Fortunately, luck's on his side, and he wakes up in the house – the bed – of a local clinic doctor, Mohammed Saleem. Attractive and smart, with a sharp sense of humor and a tattoo, Mohammed is exactly the kind of guy John falls for. Mohammed has very strict rules about what should and shouldn't happen during a recovery period, but John's sure he can change that.
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The present tense makes this story feel very urgent and immediate -- while it's a choice I don't always enjoy, here it was perfect for combat and escape. The situation is savage, with only a moment for sweet, and the two men take what they can from their opposite sides of a great divide. The ending left me sighing.


The Rosebud by M Raiya

James was born with the ability to heal any injury or illness simply by touching the person who is suffering. The price James pays is falling in love with the person he's just healed. But how can he act on any of his infatuations if he knows that the moment he heals someone else, his feelings for the last person will end? He goes through life avoiding people as much as possible, using his gift with great discretion, and constantly nursing a broken heart.

One night, James comes across a car crushed beneath a logging truck in northern Vermont. Inside, dying, is Ambient, the most beautiful man James has ever seen. All he can do is hope that this time, his gift will not turn into a curse, because Ambient is not someone he can resist.
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Insta-love with a good explanation works lots better than insta-love just because. James comes with a built in insta-love generator, and coping with it is a major plot point, so yay. Not so sure where the other guy is coming from, aside from a serious case of gratitude and a hippie attitude. I don't like the soul-mate thing in general, and Ambient's choices smack of that, so it's left me with mixed feelings. Name choice here was a bit of a mood breaker. Non-standard names are fine, but this one isn't easy to say so it became little jolts on the page. I wanted to call him River or Wind and see if that helped.

I really liked what the writer did with James, so I'll keep an eye out for other stories, cause this one has a lot of good points.


Dregger's Deep by J. Rocci

Tulley is the head of security for the most influential business man in Oilsmouth. His latest assignment from the boss is to escort the company’s new doctor down to tend to the miners of Dreggers Deep. Unfortunately, Dr. Edmund Peniwill and Tulley have a history. Edmund left Tulley behind to attend medical school overseas, with no request for Tulley’s input. But Tulley isn’t the type to hold a grudge, even if he’s not sure what he’s currently feeling. Life in Oilsmouth isn’t easy, though, and a brush with sky pirates soon has the two resolving a few issues.
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I was impressed with the world building -- the impression of a dirty industrial world hit the page really fast.

"At least he had new boots on his feet and had washed the grime off his face just that morning."


Like washing his face wasn't something he did all that often, no reason to, grime's just part of everyday.

For some reason, I had the impression that this whole setting was underground, so sky pirates needed an attitude adjustment on my part, which is my bad.

This sort of had the feeling of being part of a larger project. Tulley and Edmund came to an understanding by the end, but a couple of characters that got introduced like they were really important (Kit and Edge) disappeared completely. Where'd they go? Were they supposed to come back in a chapter three that isn't there?

I haven't read a lot of steampunk, but I think I like it, and will check out more of this author.



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